Nice Dino! May I make a suggestion regarding the verb tense in the first one? How about:
“…where the smell of smoke clings to the walls and everywhere.”
In the second one you could actually eliminate “who is” and just go straight to the gerund. I think it would sound more natural.
One of the things I hate most is going into a room where the smell of smoke has clung to the walls and everywhere.
It’s wonderful to look at my nephew who is clinging to his mother.
Nice Dino! May I make a suggestion regarding the verb tense in the first one? How about:
“…where the smell of smoke clings to the walls and everywhere.”
In the second one you could actually eliminate “who is” and just go straight to the gerund. I think it would sound more natural.
If you need to cling to something, please check it’s not an anchor: sometimes, it goes under…
Ahah! Very witty, Paolo! I think at the end I would say “they go under”.
Thank you Tony, I’ll try again.
If you need to cling to something, please check it’s not an anchor: sometimes, they go under.
The Philosophical Sailor. 😉
I likes Pzeco’s period very much!
😐…I like
Pzeco is a Philosopher. It comes naturally to him.
Why don’t you have a go, Norma?
Usually I prefer to cling to the strength of the other people rather using mine..!
Nice! Two things though:
1) “other people” (senza “the”)
2) “rather than…”